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Another failed attempt
The rain drips down my face
Blurring my sight and my mind
As I realize leaving didn't help

I look up to the sky
Water pelting my forehead
I feel saddened, lost, hopeless
But never do I feel comfortable

It's been like this for weeks
This endless torment
Looking for a place to be
But knowing it is futile

My foot falls to the heavy concrete
Water seeping up my jeans
My legs buckle and I fall to the ground
Water and tears following after

Someone nearby sees me kneeling
I pull myself up and walk more
I don't need to draw attention
There isn't any help to give me

I near my building, stopping once more
My eyes downcast and my body slouched
Even here I know I won't feel safe
I could never call this place my home

I search desperately for that one place
Where I may smile and be myself once more
But for now, I trudge on through the rain
Wondering when this struggle will end.
©2007-2009 ~Baleron87
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!!! This could have described my Wednesay night perfectly! Even the rain stuff (caught in a major storm). Not the best night, but the morning means things get better usually!
I love this poem. Again, I get the sense of hopelessness. This line here especially:
As I realize leaving didn't help
Very powerful!
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That's... saddening... Aww! *huggles* I wish I could have made your night better and all. As it so happens, my Wednesday night drew out exactly as the poem described. Guess that's what happens when too many things crowd one's mind.

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